What programme do you use to model with? I think it's looking good so far. I can't really offer any critique though because i know nothing abnout moddeling. Hell it looks good to me though
well I practised my 3D for 4 years and I got my self known on DA and in College and I got email from a company asking me to do some one off work for them and they liked my work and now I work for them ^^
In particular this model will not deform properly in the breasts and face. You had much better breast poly flow on a different piece you did (Willow Raw Model) but even that will have some interesting form loss where the breast meets the torso.
The face is hard to tell from this render, but it doesn't seem to take into account any deformations either.
This isn't important for a flat render as you have here, but if you wanted to animate this you would need to address this issue early.
As a base is good.. but check proportions: they are a bit odd. Skull is somewhat small upwards and maybe a tad too broad. From the side, the backspine is too bent.. and check back anatomy volumes, is not yet very convincing.
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